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Eternal Love by ~SSMcLeod:iconSSMcLeod:



Lips of sin,

Beckon again.

Tempting eyes,

Prominent lies.

The Devil calls,

An angel falls.

For broken wings that sting

Heaven cannot always bring,

The sweet nectar of

Eternal love.

For those who lust,

There is no trust.

Some desire.

Some acquire.

Filled with jealousy so green,

All the heart can pour is mean.

The storm never parts

For those with broken hearts,

Unless you taste the nectar of

Eternal love.
©2007-2008 ~SSMcLeod
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~phantom909:iconphantom909: Mar 8, 2007, 5:26:52 PM
maybe if i could write that well.....

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if everyone is special doesnt that make us more simalar
~SSMcLeod:iconSSMcLeod: Mar 8, 2007, 6:33:36 PM
than?

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~phantom909:iconphantom909: Mar 9, 2007, 11:55:01 AM
what do you mean than?????....... i think you ment then im pretty sure

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if everyone is special doesnt that make us more simalar
~tore-your-dress:icontore-your-dress: Jun 5, 2007, 8:21:20 PM
usually i hate poetry that rhymes because it makes me feel like you haven't said what you've wanted to or the way you wanted to in order to get it to fit the scheme. oddly enough though, i like this a lot, i think it all came together in one point and one idea.

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~4649:icon4649: Jul 15, 2007, 11:41:02 PM
bravo

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~Fire-Hawk:iconFire-Hawk: Feb 24, 2008, 4:35:45 PM
Agreed

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