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Random Quote V - Grief by ~SSMcLeod:iconSSMcLeod:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2007-2008 ~SSMcLeod
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Submitted: Feb 28, 2007
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Part of my Random Quote series... (the others are in scraps until I find an image to work with them)

Disclaimer: Random Quotations were all parts of stories or poetry that were otherwise bad. However, I liked these individual portions so I thought I would share :D

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~Heart-Bound-By-Kyubi:iconHeart-Bound-By-Kyubi: Feb 28, 2007, 3:40:07 PM
I would have used different colors. Like a brighter red (like the emo combo of red and black) just so it would be easier to read.

The last line sounds... I dunno. Awkward, but I can understand why you put Nothing before Everything, so I don't know what to change...

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And the Author said, "Let there be Fanfiction." And there was Fanfiction. And the Author beheld the Fanfiction and saw that it was good. And thus saith the Author, "Aww, NaruHina is so delicious!"

Thou Shalt Read: [link]
~SSMcLeod:iconSSMcLeod: Feb 28, 2007, 3:44:07 PM
I believe the awkwardness comes from the common use of the statement "everything or nothing"... the whole all before none :P

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~Heart-Bound-By-Kyubi:iconHeart-Bound-By-Kyubi: Feb 28, 2007, 3:46:49 PM
Yeah, thats where it comes from... I just dunno how to fix the awkwardness without, ya know, saying "everything or nothing" instead.

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And the Author said, "Let there be Fanfiction." And there was Fanfiction. And the Author beheld the Fanfiction and saw that it was good. And thus saith the Author, "Aww, NaruHina is so delicious!"

Thou Shalt Read: [link]
~SSMcLeod:iconSSMcLeod: Feb 28, 2007, 3:47:53 PM
Which essentially moots the whole statement :P

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~Heart-Bound-By-Kyubi:iconHeart-Bound-By-Kyubi: Feb 28, 2007, 3:49:16 PM
True, the argument simply repeats... There MUST be a solution...

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And the Author said, "Let there be Fanfiction." And there was Fanfiction. And the Author beheld the Fanfiction and saw that it was good. And thus saith the Author, "Aww, NaruHina is so delicious!"

Thou Shalt Read: [link]
~SSMcLeod:iconSSMcLeod: Feb 28, 2007, 3:50:22 PM
Reinvent common phrasing in North America...

from now on it is nothing or everything :D

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~Heart-Bound-By-Kyubi:iconHeart-Bound-By-Kyubi: Feb 28, 2007, 3:51:34 PM
Good luck with that, lol ^_^;;

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And the Author said, "Let there be Fanfiction." And there was Fanfiction. And the Author beheld the Fanfiction and saw that it was good. And thus saith the Author, "Aww, NaruHina is so delicious!"

Thou Shalt Read: [link]
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